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No not yet. I've been away this weekend.

You still too lazy to point them out? I shall keep you posted. Love hearing from all! :D

Why do I have to take the whole thing out?-to Lunabuna43 I fiished up the misstakes...

I'm sorry this is long. I wanted to make it longer so sorry. :lol: Ok. I need this reveiwed because I am about to send this later on to a ...

As the heartbreak set in. sets I would have to sey when I get my heart broken I will proble feel the same way.

K and lunabuna when i reply like this it doesn't give me points so.. ya. I shall fix all misstakes tommorow when I have time. Sorry I have to go.

Gotcha. *wisper* you know you could get in truble for posting a post like that.

Thanks I'll be sure to fix them in a bit. I'm only suposed to be on for one thing and it's not this...

There for three diffrent peoeple but thanks.

You know what afte my day I'm not sure we're going to have a mother's day at all. Oh just to let you know there 3 diffrent poems.

I liked that- The metaphor of how her heart was already his but I didn't get the last part... Explain it to me please.

That is very beautiful. You could proble extend it a little.

That is a very short intro and prologue. But very discriptive. In the last part I got a little lost though. Over all pretty good.

Jess Draive's friend goes through the prosses of mopeing when she losses a boy friend and I'm not sure if m character on that part is shallow or not...

Ok thanks I didn't see that.