mycocosm

Hi there, I'm quite impressed with this opening chapter to a novel I am curious to keep reading. Your descriptions are very evocative but you also strike a great balance ...

Hey there, Back for a second review today! I like this story that you've created, I think it asks many questions that it then answers, comes full circle, and leaves ...

Hi there, I like the beginning of this story. You manage to paint a decent picture with your description and start hinting to a possible plot. Here are some thoughts ...

Hi there creeperfeverdreams, This is an intriguing piece of writing, you ask many questions (quite explicitly), and it makes me want to know more. I have a couple of comments ...

Hi there, I will begin by saying that on a personal level I disagree with the premise of this piece and the arguments that you make. Your essay managed to ...

Hi :) I read this work a few days ago and left the tab open so that I could come and review it when I had the time. You've managed ...

Hey there Moo, here to review. I've got to say that this is a very original poem, and it is the first I see that makes the shape of something. ...

Hello there, here to review. This was a nice work, a good start for a novel. However, there are some mistakes and things that you could improve. Firstly, Capri sun ...

Hey there, Roundsquare, here to review as requested. :D I will review this separately with every chapter. Chapter One There aren't many mistakes here, but there are a few things ...

Hello there Smile, here to review your piece. This was a nice work, with a good message, but it was a little confusing in some parts. It's something we all ...

Hello, here to review. This was a very nice poem, and I like how you connect moonlight with faeries and mystical creatures. I also liked how you set a fantastic ...

Hey there, here to review! I really liked the poem. I liked how the first verses in some stanzas are practically the same, but you modify them so there isn't ...

Hello there, here to review. This was a nice poem, and you kept a rhythmicity throughout most of it, making it almost musical to read. However, there are a couple ...

Hello, here for a review. That was, well, depressing. But I also find it was very creative (I just hope it's not true). Anyway, this song was well structured and ...

Hello there, here for a review. This was a very nice poem, and the flow was, in some places very good and even rhythmical. I like the concept of this ...