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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the fury

    Wow Laureine! This is mwgoza97!! I am a lover of poetry and this poem goes exremely deep. I can feel the pain, anger, and sadness of this poem. I am ...

    Jun 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Falling In Love With A Jesuit Vampire At Her Aunt's House! What??? Absolute Craziness!!!/True Love!! (Parts 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 please read!)

    Hello Strange, My name is mwgoza97, and I think that the poem is off to great start. Here is some suggestions for you, in order to make it much it ...

    Aug 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Humor Re: Skyfall

    Hello tigeraye, I'm mwgoza97, and I am here to review your short stories, and help you make this work of art into a masterpiece that many readers will enjoy reading. ...

    Aug 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: How Can One Be Happy?

    This is the most emotional poem that I have ever read. With the description that has so much pain and agony from the protagonist's point of view. I have felt ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Girl

    For an extremely short poem, it has great potential. In my opinion, I wish you would have given more imagery, and description. Tell us the pain that the girl felt. ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: The Interview

    Wow. This short story went a different way than expected. The description of Lauren and her split personality Jesse made this piece of art enjoyable to read. Her tragic past ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I Lie

    Oh my Goodness. This poem is something that I have never experience in my life. There is definitely a lot of potential. This helpless person, that is about to die, ...

    Aug 21, 2016


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— Helen Keller