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Re: Teenage Girl Fatality
Thank you!!!
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Crave
Well the pieces were my feelings. The boy made me kind of feel like they shouldn't matter so those were the pieces if that makes any sense. Thanks for the ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Teenage Girl Fatality
Thank you! A lot of people have mentioned a deeper meaning, that's what I was going for and I glad you can see it! Thanks again! I hope we can ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Crave
Thank you for your review! You didn't sound harsh at all! I fixed up those few errors, I agree, it does sound better now. I enjoy titles too. I tend ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Teenage Girl Fatality
Thank you is much! I really appreciate your review! I'm really glad you liked it and felt the emotion (:
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: There's Always War
Awesome! It's up now, it's called Teenage Girl Fatality
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Teenage Girl Fatality
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. It was a real story, so yah I put quite a bit of effort into it
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Delete
Wow! This is intense for such a short poem! I like to start my poetry views off with explanations. Firstly, I could feel the emotion in this as I read ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Crave
I changed the one line check it out. I also made some adjustments to capitalization. Any better you think?
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Crave
Thanks for your advice!
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
I'm so flattered to hear that so thank you! Poetry has always just been a natural thing of mine, I guess I'm lucky! Thanks again :D
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Randy's Point of View from "The Outsiders" (the fountain scene)
Thank you so much!! Yah, this was for school but I was happy with it. It was slit up into separate paragraphs in pages format, but got all messed up ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
Thank you!! I'm glad you can relate to it! We should cowrite a poem together sometime!
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: The Warrior
Definitely, no problem! I just wrote a poem myself if you would be so kind to review it (;
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
Thank you so much!! I'm so happy I got a review so soon! Yeah, the you was supposed to be your. I'll see if I can fix it. Thanks again! ...
Nov 14, 2014
