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  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: a word

    Hey there. Thanks for the review but I was just doing this more of a tool to vent, wasn't really trying to do anything with proper stuff or for commenters. ...

    Dec 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Outlier Love

    Hahaha, I'm actually glad someone noticed that! I'm not sure if it's a good thing, but I listend to his album while writing this poem here so there was a ...

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Outlier Love

    Thanks so much! I'll take a look at retouching it.

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What's

    Thanks so much!! I was feeling really deep and this was the result, haha.

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I want to _____

    I love this! It's so personable and relatable to how I feel! Nicely done.

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our Pulse

    Thank you, thank you, thank you SO MUCH for this long and helpful review. When I have some time, I'll defiently work on this. Thanks again!!!

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our Pulse

    Thank you so much! I'll definitely fix those!

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful

    Thanks so much!!

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful

    Thanks so much! I glad this made you feel so emotional, I did too. (And I fixed that extra the, thanks)

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful

    Oh, and if listened to "Take Me to Church" while writing this and it made me even more fueled to make it was the poem ended up as.

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The good, the bad, and the ungrateful

    Wow, thanks^1000000000!!!! I'm so glad you liked this! I just had to write this, I think about this fact every day. And you are most welcome! I got the inspiration ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Thanks Vibe!

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Thanks Vibe!

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: fort

    Wow, this actually made me laugh! Simple, but amusing. I like what you did with it. I found no errors at all. Sometimes we work so hard for what we ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Thanksssss

    Nov 30, 2014


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace