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A single piano plays . I ts sad tune across the gray, and desolate room reeking of death and gloom Dying embers wrought their ghost upon the wall, fraught with ...

Hey, Davies! I love the concept of this. I think that everyone should try something like this. Writing a letter to yourself, that's a brilliant way for self-assessment and improve ...

Hey, Gawrav! You've tackled a very powerful theme here and the story, plot, dialogue and overall Novel, will be dependent on that. So it's highly advisable that you first take ...

Hey, Hemayed! Yes, I can see the frustration in this poem and the urge to make that 'kill'. You've definitely made a point and you've managed to express the intents ...

Hey, Sarebear! This is such a beautiful and endearing poem. The imagery is really nice and brings out the feel of the poem. However, if there was any suggestion I ...

Hey, Teenager! I can absolutely share your sentiments since I've had the similar sort of emotions as well. Like Ancient said, you were always asking the questions and not really ...

Hey, Anna! This poem really reminds me of a children's story about a monster and his garden, but far more of a serious tone than that! I like the imagery ...

Hey, davantageous! This is a great poem and is so smooth from beginning to end. The first stanza is a great opening and delves into the context right away. I ...

Hey, Ancient! I like this piece a lot. A writer can definitely build castles in the sky and it can be that very castle that ultimately might destroy the writer's ...

Hey, BrokenSkye. This is a great effort with rhyme and I can remember my first poem being somewhat like this. You've used a simple rhyming scheme and a theme that ...

Hi, Tommy! This is quite the twisted Barney love song, no? I had been hooked right from the first stanza and was led up to the end, still curious as ...

Hey, UpandOut15! A simple poem about goodbyes and missed times, just as the title suggests. I like the simplicity of the piece and the easy way that you've managed to ...

Hey, creativity! This is really nice poem and I especially like the proud and independent image of the persona that you have portrayed. This is a short little piece with ...

Hey, snowberry! I really like the concept behind this poem and the implementation of the rhyme scheme (despite being quite unrefined). I like the story that you are trying to ...

Solly!