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Hey, Teresa! First off, like Kamas above me said, don't hold yourself in such disregard of your work. Whether it's good or bad, we are all here to learn after ...

Hey, Charlie! I'm chuckling aloud as I'm writing this review. To find our favourite superheroes in these types of situations is both endearing and funny as can be. The last ...

Hey, crazedasian1 Welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first post! :D First off, I like this poem for its story and its conceptualization. For me, the structure is quite ...

Hermy!

XD Hey, WrittenInStone! I've got goosebumps all over from reading this piece and I've got to say that you've managed to capture that gritty, gory effect only found in the ...

Hi Mirasol! This is a light and compact poem with wonderful lines and a great meaning. Many people would look at the sky as being a boring space with just ...

Hey, barefootrunner! This is quite an interesting piece, especially because you've played with the words really well and the poem in itself is a good lesson. All trufax, no doubt ...

Hey misstoria! I love the frank and casual message of this poem. I didn't get tired of the comparisons to all those cliched movies and of the persona wanting all ...

Hello, FreshMeat! Well, this poem is pretty good, considering it is a first effort. My first effort isn't wasn't even half as good. I don't know if you've edited after ...

Hey, Heyley! You've delved into such an important matter that most people oversee quite easily. The transition of the girl 'as she walks by' to 'when she gets home' looks ...

Hey there, canonball! This poem is structured really well. The imagery here of the 'creature' and how obsessed you are with seeing 'it' again is all very well described. I've ...

Mikko! This story is sweetness personified! The curious little girl asking all her questions and the father deciphering a way to answer them in the most accurate yet understandable way, ...

Hey, wewinwelose! This poem sounds a little raw and could use some more refinement. But on the whole, 8 minutes? O.O That's great! You've weaved a wonderful tale for the ...

Hey, creativity! The dark tone of the poem really sets the mood from the first line. You've managed to use some great rhyming here and I simply love the entire ...

Hey Renn! This poem is so great and expressive. The title is so interesting and it drives me right down to the last line. Your does have a lot of ...