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Re: She Held A Flame in her Hand
I thought this poem was great for those who understand that even main characters have to die. I never liked poems like this until now, it was so...beautiful,extravagant,creative,understandable, and ma
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: Twin Blades chapter one
Very short to be a first chapter also how did his sister blow up her wall and how did it all start? I do like the apocalyptic setting, but its ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: sigh
I like how you make it so that you can relate that sigh to a mistake you made or a feeling that you left something. I also want to say ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: I'll always remember you
I like the description, the emphasis, and your openness to whatever gender the reader wants the person to be. I think you have an imaginative thinking style because this is ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Where broken dreams are castles
I love it it is hilarious. It seems a little silly but interesting all the same. I've written something just like that when I was 8 so its close to ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: fragile
I felt the same way a year ago. This poem is how everyone feels somewhere in their life. I think that having inspiration from what's happening right then is a ...
Feb 27, 2015
