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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: She Held A Flame in her Hand

    I thought this poem was great for those who understand that even main characters have to die. I never liked poems like this until now, it was so...beautiful,extravagant,creative,understandable, and ma

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Twin Blades chapter one

    Very short to be a first chapter also how did his sister blow up her wall and how did it all start? I do like the apocalyptic setting, but its ...

    Mar 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: sigh

    I like how you make it so that you can relate that sigh to a mistake you made or a feeling that you left something. I also want to say ...

    Mar 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I'll always remember you

    I like the description, the emphasis, and your openness to whatever gender the reader wants the person to be. I think you have an imaginative thinking style because this is ...

    Mar 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Where broken dreams are castles

    I love it it is hilarious. It seems a little silly but interesting all the same. I've written something just like that when I was 8 so its close to ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: fragile

    I felt the same way a year ago. This poem is how everyone feels somewhere in their life. I think that having inspiration from what's happening right then is a ...

    Feb 27, 2015


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening