mongoose

Thanks, I'll take on board your suggestions and play at around a little with them, my biggest downfall is just sticking commas in random places aha Cheers glad you liked ...

Thankyou, I've not wrote ages so it's so nice to receive this feed back, cheers!:)

Thankyou so much! I am glad that you understand its meaning and how strong the emotions are. Cheers!:)

You're welcome!:P

Thankyou and im glad you enjoyed it:)

Thankyou, im terrible at punctuation so thanks I'll get that sorted out:)

Thankyou, so much it means so much to me:)

Thabkyou, and yeah I know what you mean, but I be wouldn't want to put it down, I'm not the best at positive writing, because I usually write when I'm ...

Thankyou, aha and strange, and yeah I'd rather shy away than be like 'hey im free tae me' its like no, too much complicated tuff to deal with

Thankyou, i've read through all of the reviews that you've posted and thankyou again, i'm going to siv through my works and sort them out, btw you've missed a chapter ...

Aha its alright, glad you enjoyed it:)

Thabkyou for your worldview and I'll sort out the capitalization of Mum, Although the abuser is the male character Haji, not Nyota, Thanks again

Thanks that means a lot, and yeah you've got it spot on thee by the way, although this prologue is like an explanation for a later chapter, and a way ...

You're welcome and thanks:P

You're welcome glad i could help:P