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mollycarraway

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Throwing Stones

    Hi there! So, first off I wanna say that I REALLY like this! It's a great idea to draw from and write about, and it kinda has the feel of ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You are who you pretend to be

    Hi there! So, I am HIGHLY impressed. You said this only took less than 15 minutes??? And it's got rhyme and meter??? THAT takes real talent. I want you to ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Just a reflection away..

    Hi there! So I really enjoyed this! It's inspirational and tender, which is something the world needs more of. However, there is always room for improvement. :) So let's dive ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Bike Ride

    Hi there! I'm Molly, I'll be reviewing your work (as if that wasn't obvious already...) I'll start by saying you've got some GREAT voice. You really know how to draw ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Open Up for Me

    Hi Qara! I just want to tell you right now that this is so beautiful. I really loved reading it because it was so simply refreshing. I love how easy ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Random Choice of Poems

    Remember the Holocaust; Do Not Be Silent. Some write Out of phobia - A phobia of Inadequate expression Or of Vocalizing emotions. I write So that I Can breathe. I ...

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Labyrinth: Chapter Two

    YES YES YES!!!! THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!! I have absolutely no complaints at all. Honestly! It's very gripping and easy to read, and I LOVE it!!!! You're an amazing writer, really ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Nowhere, Now Here - Chapter 2

    Hi there!! I don't often click on the links to these novels with high expectations. But I've gotta tell you, your story was WAY better than any I've read thus ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The little things between us

    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Ok, now that I got that out, I have to say, good job!!! You've conveyed your emotions fabulously, and the beautiful thing about it is that ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wanting to end it all

    Hi there! Ok, so I really liked the idea of this poem. And if you were intending for it to be only 3 lines, then that's great. However, for this ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Till we meet again

    Hi there! So, I really liked this. It's such an emotional piece, and such emotion is very hard to express in words. I commend you for that. I hate to ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The playground is burning

    Stunning. Absolutely incredible. I love it, seriously I do. The formatting is really engaging, too. I love how it's always in the future tense, and constantly switching back and forth ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: maidenhood (and a tale of two cities)

    i am eerie with lights— Seems to be everyones favorite line. And, not surprisingly, it has stuck with me ever since you first repeated it to me on our way ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Eleven:Eleven

    Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl scream* I have said this before and I will say it again for the rest of my life: I LOVE POETRY THAT I CAN RELATE TO. And this, ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Innocence of a Child

    This was so beautiful!!! I like it a lot, and I want you to expand on it. First off, there's this stanza: So I will dream and cry, for just ...

    Aug 1, 2011


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