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Re: Throwing Stones
Hi there! So, first off I wanna say that I REALLY like this! It's a great idea to draw from and write about, and it kinda has the feel of ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: You are who you pretend to be
Hi there! So, I am HIGHLY impressed. You said this only took less than 15 minutes??? And it's got rhyme and meter??? THAT takes real talent. I want you to ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Just a reflection away..
Hi there! So I really enjoyed this! It's inspirational and tender, which is something the world needs more of. However, there is always room for improvement. :) So let's dive ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: A Bike Ride
Hi there! I'm Molly, I'll be reviewing your work (as if that wasn't obvious already...) I'll start by saying you've got some GREAT voice. You really know how to draw ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Open Up for Me
Hi Qara! I just want to tell you right now that this is so beautiful. I really loved reading it because it was so simply refreshing. I love how easy ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: A Random Choice of Poems
Remember the Holocaust; Do Not Be Silent. Some write Out of phobia - A phobia of Inadequate expression Or of Vocalizing emotions. I write So that I Can breathe. I ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Labyrinth: Chapter Two
YES YES YES!!!! THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!! I have absolutely no complaints at all. Honestly! It's very gripping and easy to read, and I LOVE it!!!! You're an amazing writer, really ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Nowhere, Now Here - Chapter 2
Hi there!! I don't often click on the links to these novels with high expectations. But I've gotta tell you, your story was WAY better than any I've read thus ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The little things between us
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Ok, now that I got that out, I have to say, good job!!! You've conveyed your emotions fabulously, and the beautiful thing about it is that ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Wanting to end it all
Hi there! Ok, so I really liked the idea of this poem. And if you were intending for it to be only 3 lines, then that's great. However, for this ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Till we meet again
Hi there! So, I really liked this. It's such an emotional piece, and such emotion is very hard to express in words. I commend you for that. I hate to ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: The playground is burning
Stunning. Absolutely incredible. I love it, seriously I do. The formatting is really engaging, too. I love how it's always in the future tense, and constantly switching back and forth ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: maidenhood (and a tale of two cities)
i am eerie with lights— Seems to be everyones favorite line. And, not surprisingly, it has stuck with me ever since you first repeated it to me on our way ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Eleven:Eleven
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl scream* I have said this before and I will say it again for the rest of my life: I LOVE POETRY THAT I CAN RELATE TO. And this, ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Innocence of a Child
This was so beautiful!!! I like it a lot, and I want you to expand on it. First off, there's this stanza: So I will dream and cry, for just ...
Aug 1, 2011
