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I agree with Greenjay about it sounding a bit rushed, but I did like it. And yeah, what is this part of? the geinning of a novel? In other words, ...

hey :) yeah there is a number 25 somewhere, its in my protfolio, I just posted 24.5 it got a little ocnfyusing, sorry about that! Meevs xx

I agree with McMourning, I too have read poems that have been oublished that are like this, you clearly have the talent to write! Meevs x

This is really good! Really REALLY good! You have such unique and well developed characters, I love it! Meevs x

Another good re-write here, again it sounds very professional. I'm a little confused at thew moment though, with whats new and stuff? Are you just doing re-writes at the moment, ...

Fabien another amazing poem! I really love your stuff! This was cute, I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up your good work! Meevs x

It was reallllly good! The onion (Metaphor? I'm terrible with actually seeing the meaning of things) theme through out was original, well thought of. Keep up the good work! Meevs ...

Thank you both for taking your time to read this :) I always appreciate it! Nyame - (what a pretty username) Me and my friend did that in school! My ...

I remember doing something very similar to this diary in the war thing in history at school. Mine however was about a page long and was full f nothing lol. ...

You should be very proud of this, I enjpyed reading every bit of it, which is weird, I don't have anything to point out here. Just well done! Meevs x

I didn't mean that this was a whole story, just like the rist chapter, just to clear that one up :) Thank you all for the crits and stuff, It ...

Hey JC, thanks again :) Nick is not going to turn into chris lol, I just won't let myself write that! Oh and Rob and Chris are still very much ...

Yeah Jaimy is being snappy and rude simply because he just feels unwanted by Rob and he's just angry at the whole situation. Meevs x

Heyo! Thanks for the crits :D Den- I have always spelt Mom like that :D I dunno, I know most people in England spell it with a U but well, ...

Thanks! I am currently working on this, Ice Cubes is my first priority though. But sometimes it's nice to just take a break and write something completly different. I will ...