miyaviloves

I think that the flow worked better towards the end of the poem, some of it at the beginning sounded a little forced. Other than that I liked this, but ...

I really likes this, mature writing, its original and i loved it! Like JC i can only offer praise here as i could see nothing wrong with it :D PM ...

It sounds like an Irish drinking song on crack. - Nooo it dosen't sound like that atall, what a silly thing to say :? Anyway, I don't think people can ...

Ah thanks for posting the chapter orders, will make it easier to follow :) Tammy is back yay! Gosh I cant tell you how much i love POD, its soooo ...

Lol i liked nthis, funny and original at the same time. But I'm not really sure what's going on in all honesty, but I did enjoy reading it! I couldnt ...

Again another great peice here, Im really loving this! yay! (and you can PM when the next bit is done, I wou,d have missed this is you hadn't of messaged ...

Oooh i liked this, very intriguing! I think all that needed to be pointed out Ofour pretty much covered, so I can just tell you how much i liked it ...

the waves B eaken us to come Is there any reason why is it capitalised? therder IS this supposed to be further? angery Angry glicining Glistening B ilding Again why ...

I dont know much about poems, and formatting them or anything I wilkl just tell you what I thought of the poem :) I really liked this one, It fit ...

You make the courtrooom seem real in this, I thin kyou have got everything right and It soiunds all very professionally done :P Jamie threw here -Just an extra e ...

I have to agree with Mandax, In all honesty I didn't even finish this poem. I don't mean to sound harsh and nasty! It just didn't grab my attention, Work ...

I can only really echo what shadow said. YOu would have been a very clever person to have made up your own language! What do you think, would Dugon (do ...

This was deleted for some reason when I posted it last night. If there's any reason for why it was deleted, could somebody tell me? I'm not sure if it ...

Yup everything has already been said that I could have pointed out here. the characters all make much more sense now, and I think you havea rgeat development in the ...

No crit's yet? what what? anyway... She swept a hand along her face and tucked it behind an ear. I had to read this a couple of times to make ...