miyaviloves

Yup defo needs a rating. I didnt really like this to be honest, I didn't connect with any of the characters and I felt that the topics you were covering ...

First off JC!!! it has been ages how are you?! We really need to catch up! Secondly this was amazing, I loved it. About the prvious comment I liked that ...

hmm I think I have to agree with everything Gal said. This poem is ok as it stands but just ok...the repetition dosen't really work, it is a very predictable ...

hey Bumblebear welcome to YWS! To be honest I didn't really enjoy this poem much, I found that the repetition was a little annoying after a while, sometimes repetition can ...

I like this, and I like the rhyming, you don't rely on it which some poems do. I don't think it has much depth but it is a nice read ...

Dramma pointed out the mistakes here that I could find. As the for poem, I like it, but I thin kyou need to add a lot more depth to give ...

First off welcome to YWS and stuff :) To be honest I really didn't like this piece, it just didn't do it for me. And having those smiley faces in ...

This is a very short and simple little poem (obviously *smacks head*) but even when poems are short usually the message can be very clear. I don't think you have ...

We were told to read 'Captian Corelli's Mandolin' for literature, it's kind of historical and actually really good, it is a little hard to get into at first but then ...

Wow I really enjoyed this! It's simple yet it works very well. Its that kind of denying love theme that I like, you have explored it well here. Won't comment ...

I agree with snoink! At the moment as this stands it really isn´t anything. But just because you were bored and didn´t feel like you put anything into it dosen´t ...

You created some amazing imagery in this and I really enjoyed reading it. The rhyming worked really well aswell, it wasn't like the whole poem was dependant on it which ...

Hey good luck with the contest! I never have the guts to send any of my stuff into competitions so well done on that already, and I definatly think this ...

P.S. -- Why were you guys so mean? It was her first try, -This was not being mean, it is simply asking for the correct formatting for the site. And ...

Heyyy I believe I met you in the welcome forum :) and Now I am here to review your work, so here it goes :D : rubbing them in an, ...