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I just spent the last 20 minutes reading through Chapter One and Chapter Two, and I have to say both chapters were very impressive. The start was very gripping of ...

Wow. This first part really hooked me in. At first it was slow for me to get into it, whether it was just me or not, I do not know. ...

A very relevant poem to what many teenagers feel right now in this day and age, including myself. I like the way that it didn't always rhyme, taking it away ...

I kind of like this - I'm presuming you're either English, or Scottish not wanting to split from England? But, I have to say I quite like how its simple ...

Ooh - scary end to the chapter! I really like the way you write and how you include lots of details of the smells, taste and touch. I would just ...

Seems like a good start to the story and it is well written. I like the story line so far, its my kind of teen fiction book, I can see ...

Interesting! I like the way it was written as I don't really get hooked into stories in third person but this surprised me! The prologue was very interesting too and ...

Heyy! Okay, this sounds like quite an interesting story, something I wouldn't mind to continue reading. It kind of reminds me of the Hunger Games, with the name drawing and ...

I'm not a professional at reviewing scripts but what caught my eye was the fact it was about World War Two. I definitely was not disappointed by clicking on this, ...

Heyy! Okay so, I'm not sure whether this is enough for a first chapter, as the other reviewers said. There's not much description, and we don't really know what's going ...

Heyy! Okay so, firstly this is my kind of story! I love romance and this is really well written, but obviously very cliche. It had loads of description, but I ...

Heyy! Okay so to start off, from what I have read this sounds like it will be a good book - there wasn't really a plot as such yet, but ...

This chapter is very very long - but that's what you would expect from a good novel! These entries are very captivating and you portray Frankie well, how I would ...