mithrim96

Hey, I'm Mith and I'm gonna give you the best review I can right now. Spelling and Grammar I can't see any spelling errors - awesome! I found the grammar ...

Hello wordsandwishes, it's Mith here to review. First of all, I think I should tell you that I wish your poem was longer. Where it stops, I don't really know ...

I could imagine this song playing in shops and on the radio all the time. Just a few things: "He said to a stranger, "I got no place to say" ...

This is really cool! I'm still a little confused as to what it all means, but hey, I loved it all the same. I liked the colour analogies at the ...

"Living and breathing for the moments that you can be together again, the moments that take your breath away." These lines were amazingly beautiful. Actually the whole thing was beautiful. ...

This is a really beautiful and sad poem. I love it. My only problem would be the last stanza because it seems forced. That is all though. It is sad ...

where I stand and will stand helplessly omniscient above the dirt pathways that God, ironic, has wrought for you. in my abstinence, intelligence, I am isolated. I have lost you ...

Your poem is really interesting and cool. I love it! I especially like these bits: Who saw your beauty when it wasn't there Who laughed on your jokes when others ...

Your poem views love in a negative light but it also brings up many of the aspects people seem to feel/know in love. I cannot think of anything I don't ...

This style of poetry is as unique as it is fascinating and effective. This poem, like the 'sheet music' it talks about, will remain in my head for (most likely) ...

This is a rather short poem that I feel needs more explanation into its meaning and its feel. You have a very professional vocabulary that makes me feel child-like in ...

Hello again. This poem of yours is very interesting and it had me staring at the screen in wonder. I found some of the lines a little confusing and scattered ...

This is a really powerful and emotive story. I'm glad I have had the opportunity to read it, though the goriness isn't so fun to read at night when you're ...

I have no suggestions on how to change this. I am dumbfounded and shocked. Your book sounds absolutely amazing. I want you to publish it so as I can read ...

You say this poem is rusty, I say it is beautiful. I once had to write a similar poem for English class about exams and you've inspired me to go ...