misstoria

This was nice but all too short. It seemed like as soon as the feelings got deep you took everything away. I agree of Gracie on the line "without you ...

I want to read more! That was really amazing! I love the emotion and feeling in this piece. My only critique is the character switch. I loved the switch, but ...

I really liked this poem, because it seems to represent today's generation.I like that this feels like a battlecry. My favorite part was We are young And we are roaring, ...

I absolutely love this!! The way you potrayed a confliction of emotions is amazing. I'm not sure if you meant for it to, but this poem potrays a confliction of ...

Every so often, she gave me a smile and her blue-green eyes would come alive and make me forget about everything else. Loved the beging stanza She was beautiful; living ...

I liked the first stanza I am perfect and I am me, This is how I'm meant to be, Power, fame and money, tearing the world apart, The mirrors are ...

"done a road most my visitors take" This particular quote makes me think that the devil himself is the speaker in red. I also liked how it was divided into ...

I think that your poem was quiete good.I liked the dramatic phrases and the over all feel of the poem. However you could improve it by making the following lines ...