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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mirror, mirror, on the wall...

    I'm with you sevendeadlysins! But Misty, girls DO talk that way. Trust me. I should know! ;) Not that I'm hot or anything, but let me replay a scene that ...

    Feb 20, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Dying Breed

    Augh. Once again another post by Incandescence that, though perhaps true, has been put in very harsh words and must be followed by a nicer post! Ravenna, though I don't ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

    This girl I know (not very well, actually) has pretty much pressured me into promising that I'll read Twilight, that it is "such a good book, SO sweet, THE BEST ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The painter I must meet

    Poetry is not really my thing, however, I can correct your spelling and grammar. Also, this poem was good, as far as I know. I looked up at the sunset ...

    Jan 11, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kill For You

    And still I don't exsist . I may as well be a long deceased breeze: Dead air. Should be exist . I thought this was good and I don't really ...

    Jan 5, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: December Moon

    I like it! It's cool how you finally find out WHO she is (the moon, of course!), because some people just leave you guessing at what they are talking about. ...

    Jan 3, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Real-Life Young Love

    Yes indeedy, I think there are emotions in this, look. This is a poem that tells of a boy, Shy and retiring , naturally coy , Love he craved but ...

    Jan 1, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Souvenirs

    Aww...that's sweet. But it doesn't seem to have much of a point. Yes, it tells a story, but, oh I don't know, it just didn't really stand out to me. ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Picture Is Worth 1,000 Words

    I loved this! it was so wonderful! I really, really enjoyed it. I think everyone pretty much covered everything I saw up there, so I guess I'll be the that ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Sleeping Fairgrounds

    This was good and very descriptive and really made you think back. Very vintage. Cool. Anway, I didn't get this part... Fun mirrors make you Dance and hop slowly, Unsure ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Waves

    I like it too, *starts to sing in a carefree voice (slightly off key)* The Waves, The Waves, The Wonderful, Glorious Waves! How They Move. In And Out, Up And ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Other » General, General Re: Christmas

    Very fact, I know a boy who started The Weekly Ostracizer (a myspace group you can join for free) and he decided to ostracize the stupid christmas movies that come ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: this one's about sex

    Ok, gross. Sorry but this should DEFINTILY be rated R! It said that if it's about sex (which it is) then it should be rated R in the rules. But ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dangerous in Numbers - Lethal Alone

    was good, but the grammar mistakes really spoiled it for me. I'm not going to point out the individual mistakes because I'm too lazy to do that right now, but ...

    Dec 31, 2006
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Eyes of Elves

    Goodness gracious! Girl, where is your grammar? *raises a critical eyebrow* Here we go...*deep breath* Read this SLOWLY out loud to yourself and MAKE SURE to pay close attention to ...

    Dec 31, 2006


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