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Re: Mirror, mirror, on the wall...
I'm with you sevendeadlysins! But Misty, girls DO talk that way. Trust me. I should know! ;) Not that I'm hot or anything, but let me replay a scene that ...
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: A Dying Breed
Augh. Once again another post by Incandescence that, though perhaps true, has been put in very harsh words and must be followed by a nicer post! Ravenna, though I don't ...
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
This girl I know (not very well, actually) has pretty much pressured me into promising that I'll read Twilight, that it is "such a good book, SO sweet, THE BEST ...
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: The painter I must meet
Poetry is not really my thing, however, I can correct your spelling and grammar. Also, this poem was good, as far as I know. I looked up at the sunset ...
Jan 11, 2007 -
Re: Kill For You
And still I don't exsist . I may as well be a long deceased breeze: Dead air. Should be exist . I thought this was good and I don't really ...
Jan 5, 2007 -
Re: December Moon
I like it! It's cool how you finally find out WHO she is (the moon, of course!), because some people just leave you guessing at what they are talking about. ...
Jan 3, 2007 -
Re: Real-Life Young Love
Yes indeedy, I think there are emotions in this, look. This is a poem that tells of a boy, Shy and retiring , naturally coy , Love he craved but ...
Jan 1, 2007 -
Re: Souvenirs
Aww...that's sweet. But it doesn't seem to have much of a point. Yes, it tells a story, but, oh I don't know, it just didn't really stand out to me. ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: A Picture Is Worth 1,000 Words
I loved this! it was so wonderful! I really, really enjoyed it. I think everyone pretty much covered everything I saw up there, so I guess I'll be the that ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Sleeping Fairgrounds
This was good and very descriptive and really made you think back. Very vintage. Cool. Anway, I didn't get this part... Fun mirrors make you Dance and hop slowly, Unsure ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: The Waves
I like it too, *starts to sing in a carefree voice (slightly off key)* The Waves, The Waves, The Wonderful, Glorious Waves! How They Move. In And Out, Up And ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Christmas
Very fact, I know a boy who started The Weekly Ostracizer (a myspace group you can join for free) and he decided to ostracize the stupid christmas movies that come ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: this one's about sex
Ok, gross. Sorry but this should DEFINTILY be rated R! It said that if it's about sex (which it is) then it should be rated R in the rules. But ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Dangerous in Numbers - Lethal Alone
was good, but the grammar mistakes really spoiled it for me. I'm not going to point out the individual mistakes because I'm too lazy to do that right now, but ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Eyes of Elves
Goodness gracious! Girl, where is your grammar? *raises a critical eyebrow* Here we go...*deep breath* Read this SLOWLY out loud to yourself and MAKE SURE to pay close attention to ...
Dec 31, 2006
