missbookworm

This is a great poem! It flows really nicely and has a great rhythmic beat to it, which is exactly what you want with lyrical poetry. I can't think of ...

This was really good! Definitely the best poem that I've read in this section so far. The only thing that I think could use some touching up is your second ...

There is a lot of emotion behind this poem and I like it! First things first: punctuation. Periods aren't enough for most of your sentences. You need commas, semi-colons, etc., ...

I loved this!! So so much! Definitely my favorite story that I've read on here! There were only a few small mistake grammar and spelling wise but other than that ...

This was really nice! The only problem that I had with it is that it's lacking a lot of punctuation!! Fix that and it'll be great. :) I'm not much ...

Good story! A few things to keep in mind: 1. Proofread! You had several spelling mistakes throughout that could have been easily avoided if you had proofread before you submitted. ...

Hello! This is a good story and definitely has a lot of potential! There were a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes but all of that can be fixed pretty ...

This was a great read! I loved how descriptive you were and all of the imagery really helped me picture what you were talking about in my mind. The only ...

This piece definitely displayed real teenage emotion and the angst that naturally comes with young love. I like it! One thing that would make it a bit easier to read ...

Hello! After reading your story I wasn't confused at all! In some of the other reviews people said that they didn't know if the narrator was a boy or a ...

This was really great! I loved the contrast between the dark mood and the innocence (usually) of a child. Your grammar was great and the story had a wonderful flow. ...