mirandamaddness

This definitely captured my attention enough. Acctually it was the title that caught my attention first 'The Elements' *allows the words to roll off her tounge in just the right ...

The second I finished reading and geeking about how awesome it was I picked up Twilight and started rereading it! :D It shall not end on my watch! *checks watch...watch ...

A common theme here could be: 'indecision' or 'boredom' or 'what everyone thinks about but never actually says anything when the randomly burst out laughing in front of their friends'... ...

*stares blankly at the page* :shock: *blinks* :shock: *blinks* :shock: It's so ture and so metephorical (is that even a word?...eh? :lol: ) I find nothing to crit. :wink: ~Star

It's funny cause it's the horrible truth. I just have a few problems with yor flow. I am a weirdo everyone says so. I am a weirdo. Everyone says so. ...

I personaly would change a few things... Wild flowers are like love... it flows... I would say: Wild flowers are like love... The two flow (insert adverb here)... the love ...

Well I see what your trying to do. *wink wink* :wink: I wonder where you got this idea from :roll: . *points to self...grins...teeheehee* :lol: The two people walked... ~Star

I'm wondering have you ever read Twilight by Stephanie Meyer? Well...if you have it sounds like it... :wink: Anyway it's a great poem that can have a lot of meanings...I ...

I have nothing to complain about except a little more detail on what your characters look like. Bring them to life! Right now they're stick figures...soon they can be rounded ...

This looks cool...hmmm...*thinks hard*...got it! my name: Is anything you want it to be... i am: An almost ordinary girl... i wonder: Why... i hear: The whisper of magic... i ...

I would cahnge a few things here: sometimes I sit or stand still [s]and I think of a different place a different time[/s] and I thinkof a different place a ...

It's beautiful in description and I love the whole point of it but I would change a few things: Summer danced As the sun beamed down On the grassy plain ...

It's awsome...I love the concept but you ran into a few bumps...like: The moon is as soft as butter; And also as hard as rock She is sweet and kind; ...