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heey When I saw how short this was I was like: pfft -.- HOWEVER... it was hilarious! I'm peronally a big twilight fan so all this was an awesome joke ...

hahahhaaa H I L A R I O U S honestly! I loved the complete and utter random-ness of it. My fave character was random guy 2 because he just ...

hey Pretty good dialoague between the characters... you made it actually interesting to listen to a sock named sock-ee (very original by the way ;)) talk. My favourite 'character' was ...

This was reeeal good! It gave a clear insight into the guy's mind and how he suffered as a kid :( Was sorta shocked at the end where we see ...

Wow Honestly, that's all I can say. I nearly teared up! And for me that's reallyyy saying something!!! When I read this I kept thinking about my best friend (i ...

Hey! This was really awesome =] I loved the rhyme scheme but there were some lines where it seemed a bit forced to me. What I really loved was how ...

heey Nice one :) It seemed a lot like a story in the shape of a poem which was awesome, it really seemed like you were talking to david :D ...

heeey millie... AWESEOMEE job hun :) I loved it ALL except for when you shorten 'th' doesnt make sense because you arent cutting out a sylable at all.. sry xD ...

hello! Your second comment haha! Lucky me :D I probably should not be commenting on this because I've read it a bit more than a few times ;) (But I ...

hahahaaaa I loved reading this.. it was hilarious! This is exactly how I feel wen I play! It can be so frustrating...taking an hour to walk to the front door, ...

I LOVED this poem! The darkness in it really showed and it made the entire thing great! I loved the ending, it was amazing! It just built to a climax ...

It was an interesting short piece... but that's the thing... EMPHASIS on short! I really can not tell where the story is going... Is the main character a shape shifter? ...

This is good as far as a person's diary goes, it reminds me of something I would write in my diary. But the thing is, it needs to be more ...

wow! I really enjoyed that... I take it Lunette's an elf? This story reminded me of the series of Artemis Fowl! Great job :D Does the story continue? Hope it ...

I enjoyed the plot alot, I like the character Remiel but I especially like the bartender and his accent, reminded me of an irish accent. I don't really have any ...