mimimac

Hey, One or two nitpicks... She can't voice her own story, one of many here in the beautiful, bloody Balkans. One of many what? People who can't voice their own ...

Hey! I will be your reviewer today. ^_^ I could not find that many things that were wrong in this... So I guess I have to resort to nitpicks. :twisted: ...

Hey! I loved that, and yes I would definitely want to read on. Your descriptions were great and we find out quite alot about the two characters (especially herald) in ...

Hey, Before I get round to the actual review, I would like to inquire about why this piece is in fantasy fiction? Is it the beginning of a story and ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long to get round to reviewing this, I've just been so busy with that project and stuff :/ However I'm done now :D On to ...

Hey Rosey! Awesome job. I couldn't find any mistakes >.< ( If the next person to review finds any, I will scream :P) The characters were brought out well, especially ...

Hey! Sorry I did not review chapter 1! Been real busy lately. But i read it and now I'm going to review this! I'm going to review the small part ...

Rosey! That was amazing. Awesome job! I loved the final lines especially. Can't really critique about anything since I don't know enough about poetry myself to point out mistakes about ...

Hey, Mimi here as requested. Our track team was the best, we knew that and now they did too. Here you suddenly switch to first person when you were writing ...

Hey, I'll be your reviewer today :) I really enjoyed this, it kept me interested and I want to read more :P I only have a few nit picks: The ...

Hi! Mimi here as requested. :) The distant thrum of electricity is the only companion to my hurried footsteps as I walk ever closer to my reeking destination. This eerie ...

Heey! So, what’s he been doing I hear you ask? Well, in order for me to tell you, I’ll have to take you back a couple of weeks. July the ...

Hey! Thalia and I looked at each other, eyes wide with fright, not knowing what to do. Hesitantly, Thalia crept up on the fallen figure and said, “Malc? Mr. Malc, ...

Hey! I'll be your critic today :P March 28th, 2015 A.D, 3:15 P.M, Earth “What information have you gathered about the traveler?” “W-well sir you see…” “Spit it out cur!” ...

Hey! Mimi here as requested :) Ok so the bold parts are my comments, underlined things are stuff I have added and crossed out things are... crossed out. :P As ...