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I like this poem, but I agree with the others. You should break it up differently. Overall, though, it was fun to read. Keep it up.

I agree too. You and the one you told your secret to might not be buddies forever, and that's when it comes out. Anyway, pretty good. Like the other two ...

That was freaky as heck. It had a good rhythm to it, but I've got one question. Did you say a girl got raped by a building? This is poem ...

This is one of the better poems I've read here. It tells an interesting story and has a rhythm. It was fun and easy to read. I'm going to give ...

I'm not sure what that last part meant about grabbing his throat and green hearts, but then again, I'm not very deep. Overall, though, I liked it. Keep up the ...

Wow, well done. I'm not much of a poet, but I know a good poem when I hear one. You did a good job at telling us what this person ...

Wow, nice beginning. I'm really curious with what's going on in Mutts. The thing that really got me hooked was that part about the mice. Something about humans messing with ...

It was a little boring, but I didn't mind it. It was pretty good. I think I like the other Mutts better, though.

This story piqued my interest. It was written really well and gave me a quick and easy glance into the world of the Mutt stories. I think I'll start reading ...

Holy crap that was good. It was serious at parts but then a bit of humor or lightheartedness came in. I really liked it. Well done.

Well done, snoink. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. It was really well written, and If it goes on I would like to read it.

Thanks for the critique Rubric. I fixed what you told me to and will try to remember what you've said when writing the next chapter. And no, I haven't read ...

This is much better than your first post. It gives us a quick insight on what her life is like and what she goes through with those freaky past lives ...

Nice, man, nice. It was a little hard for me to follow at times because of his extremely bad grammar, but I know it was meant to be like that. ...

Here's part two. The cab pulled up to the auction house, jerking to a stop as the old brakes struggled. Gabriel nearly fell forward, his trilby hat flying up into ...