midnightstars

Hello, midnightstars here to review! I really liked the layout of your work, only a few little tweaks here and there that need to be done... your conclusion paragraph was ...

midnightstars here to review! I'll start with the nitpicks before anything else: “Whoa there man, you’re being overdramatic.” Whenever someone says you're being overdramatic, they say "You're be

Great poem Strangelove! I love doing that too! Not sure if this is much of a poem though... it's more like the story of my life. There is two nitpicks ...

Fantastic poem LanguidLiger! Your word choice was excellent and you seemed to know what you were talking about which is very important to the poem. The narrator had a few ...

Great poem retrodisco66! Your imagery and word choice was spot on. You had a few grammatical errors though which is fine since no piece is perfect. I'm just going to ...

Great poem rhiasofia! Your imagery and word choice was incredible! You knew what you were talking about in the poem which is important to get the reader engaged. Nitpicks: The ...

Great poem Annaclare!!! You explained a girls feelings and thoughts throughout the poem, you explained it very well and the narrator was into the writing as much as he should ...

Great poem cairo! You have great potential in poetry but you aren't quite there. Though this piece narrator had some grammatical errors, your thoughts are very clear and the feelings ...

Great poem kellsmore! Summer just began for me but I know what you are explaining the nights and days in the ocean. You put lots of imagery in you piece. ...

Great Poem as I said before I'm ecstatic, I love the last stanza She has a disease. It goes by the name Epilepsy. But to her... Well, it's just another ...

I honestly don't know what to say spacesoldier! I liked the piece of writing that you came up with. it was very original and very well thought out. I've read ...

Great poem shikhandin!! Your imagery and word choice was astounding!!! The poem flowed together perfectly and the sounds that you hear at night are just what you described. I only ...

I liked the writing in this piece you put imagery into my head and I could picture in my mind what was going on in the poem. The thing I ...

You hit the nail on the head fortis! You explained what a girl wants and why you wouldn't want it. If you have a hot guy wouldn't you want one ...

Hello, Baesch! I loved your work and the scenery you planted in my mind and the feelings you evoked put me in awe. I can relate, so this left a ...