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Re: Mistress:Prologue (rated 18+ explicit scenes)
Hi curiousvampire I like this and I think you should continue with it. I also think that you should re-read it as it would help with your grammar mistakes. When/if ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: The Nobodies - Chapter One: I'm Dead? No Way!
Hi XxXDustyDustXxX Thank you for the pm, and I really like the continuation of the chapter. I noticed that in some places you have missed words, so I would advise ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Martha's Baby
Hi Hiadel I like this. I think that you should re-read it as 1. it is a good habit to get into and 2. it helps you figure out what ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Water and skin
Hi isabellarivas43 I don't really understand this post and I don't get what it is a fanfiction of. I saw some mistakes so I would advise re-reading it as then ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
The best book I have ever read isn't really a book, its a series of books. Its a old series that my dad read when he was younger and he ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: My new book Flesh Hunters
Hi bhoutris I like this prologue and I can't see anything wrong with it, but I would advise re-reading as it can mean that you improve the post yourself and ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Secrets - Chapter 3
Hi whatevr88 Thanks for the pm. I like this chapter and no mistakes leap out at me but like I said last time re-read it and you can make it ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Drained {Chapter Four}
Hi *writewatiwant* I really like this story and I hope that this isn't the end. I like the way that even though Jane is facing her death she won't tell ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: I don't think there is any heart left for you to break *ED*
Hi Smexaykk01 I like this post a lot and I can't wait for more. I think you should re-read it as you have missed out some words and punctuation. I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Nobodies
Hi XxXDustyDustXxX I like this post and I can't wait for more. I think you should re-read it as there a couple of spelling mistakes that a spell check wouldn't ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter- What happened after death, chapter 1
Hi NaRachel I like it. It keeps with the Harry Potter way of story telling so it is good in that respect. I think you should re-read it as I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Orphanage ~ chapter one, part three
Hi bubblegum Thanks for the pm. I like this post, it explains about the mc's past and it helps the reader to understand her more. I think you should re-read ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Brethren Child - Continued
Hi brassnbridle I like this post and I think you said that it was a bit further on in the story then the other post. I think you should write ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Swordmaster's Path- part 2
Hi brassnbridle Thank you for the pm. I like this post and I think that the beginning of this story is very good and it keeps the reader interested. I ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: NNW
Hi KanenRenoir I like this it made me laugh. I like the way that it is told but I disagree with Jenthura, I don't think the dog needs a voice, ...
Apr 1, 2010