midnightdreary

Hi! So your poem is pretty short, but it tells so much! I especially love the last line, "For flesh is but a meal to claim". It's extremely powerful. The ...

Hi! From even just these first two chapters, I've found your story exciting and your setting creative. Overall, this chapter is strong, there are just some small things I want ...

Yikes! This was intense. I could almost feel the cold of the room and hear the screams of the patients. Great job with your descriptions! I'm not great at reviewing ...

Hi! I like the whole idea of this poem and how you spoke about putting your mental well-being above someone's expectations. It's an important topic to write about and I ...

Hi, Vegas! Let's get into this review! So the first thing I'd say, for sake of aesthetic, choose a font that's more "boring", as loud fonts can take away from ...

Hi! I'd like to say that this poem conveys your emotion without being overly dramatic or long, so great job with that. Now I have a few small critiques. "Her ...

Hey! I enjoyed this story a lot, and I was especially impressed by how you were able to create a certain mood within the first few sentences and stick to ...

Hello! I think that this poem is something that many people, (especially a lot of other teenagers I know) can relate to. So, you chose a good topic. I agree ...

Hello! I read this poem and I loved it so much! The message is wonderful and the metaphors you use are just amazing! Also, I read this poem and was ...

Hello! This poem is very creative and totally gave me a totally different view of the lines on my hands. So I'm all about the flow of a poem, and ...

Hello! It's Midnight here to review! First of all, I loved the shape and format of your poem. It just looks so pretty to me. I especially liked all the ...

Hello! I enjoyed this story, because it had some poetic elements to it, especially in your choice of adjectives. In this sentence, "He was skin and bone, torn apart deep ...

Hello, I loved reading this story! It was so bright, whimsical and calming. The names of your characters were also super cool. I agree with Lupa that this part-- (Auxiliary ...