mephistophelesangel

Thanks%u2014you%u2019re the only one who realized what%u2019s actually happening in the story :)

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Hey, Payne! (I'll just reply here for all of your previous reviews.) Your reviews pointed out things that I had not noticed the first time I read over the writing. ...

Hey! Again, thank you for your review! About your question as to why the humans are constantly killing Teal - I didn't really mean it to read like they didn't ...

Hey tigeraye! Thank you for your review! All of the things you pointed out allowed me to think about my writing a bit more, and they were all very helpful. ...

Hey Steam! Hoping that this will make this story a bit better - Gail is like God, and Teal his first creation. Teal was created out of loneliness, and when ...

Hey steam! Thanks for the review! At first your review didn't show up in my notifications, which is why I didn't check up on it earlier. It's definitely very helpful ...

Thank you for your review! Haha, this work is so old that I never expected to get a review on it. I will, of course, consider all the points you ...

Hey, donizback! I really don't have any critiques for this, I loved it entirely. It was humorous and made me crack up. Keep on writing, Mephis

I would just like to say that this poem was amazing. I loved the first part - it just made me feel really empty and sad, you know? Great job.

Hey, why would you say to not read it? This was awesome!

Hey again! So I'm guessing that this is another idea for a book? Well I would love to see future chapters! So far, this sounds like a wonderful beginning and ...

Sure, that'd be awesome!

You're welcome! You did a nice job with the introductions and relations :)