mellophone7

Wow. Biiiiiiiig words. :) Yeah, I agree with kathy45662, when she said that poems can be well written without such large words. Overall, I thought the poem was really good, ...

Wow. I really love this, especially since it is a very good way to comfort somebody who has just had a close friend or relative pass away. It has a ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, mainly because abortion was nowhere mentioned in this, and in my debate class, abortion has been brought up in bills for Student Congress, and ...

I haven't seen nor heard of this "Final Fantasy" thing you were talking about, but I still loved the poem! You stretched the rhyming a bit with Tell me your ...

I loved this poem. The emotions in it practically leaped off the page. :) The first part confused me a little bit, though. I almost got the impression that it ...

I really liked this poem, but, again, as several comments before me stated, it lacked a structure, punctuation, and capitalization. I'm not saying you HAVE to have a structure and ...

Okay, MOIMOW, I loved this!!! I could totally see this coming from you, and the title explains it all!! One thing, at the beginning, it was a little difficult to ...

I really love this poem! Perfectly saying "don't give in to temptation." Yet, what do humans do? We continually give in. Anyway, I noticed you didn't really have much punctuation, ...

I really liked this poem. This touched me, because this is how I feel sometimes. I noticed a few things, but I think the other comments already touched on them. ...

This is so cool. I've never seen anything compared like sand and glass like this before. It made for a very interesting read. It was well written, and I love ...

This shows perfectly how people can look at things and yet not SEE them. They are aware that they're there, but they don't look deep enough past the masks. In ...

I love this sooooo much! I'm a figure skater, and this is exactly how I feel most of the time, because there are several girls way younger than me at ...

This is an interesting poem. It describes very well how a person doesn't have anybody in her "happily ever after". I can feel every emotion that she is feeling as ...

Wow. I don't think I've eve read a poem with this much emotion in it. All I can say is, great work, keep it up, and never give up, even ...

I really liked this. Only one thing I would mention: I agree with a previous comment that the main theme is a little bit overused. Other than that, it's really ...