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What a beautiful poem. I can really feel the narrator's frustration and anxiety/depression. I really love the line "blocked by this mass that chokes me." I very elegantly describes the ...

A great and very well written poem! I really enjoyed the flow. The choppiness emphasizes certain parts of the poem really well. I really liked the lines "it is silenced ...

This was really good! I really enjoyed it. The mix of the paragraph and poetry was very intriguing. I think the paragraph could use some sentence variety. The first two ...

I absolutely love this! You did an amazing job creating a captivating story. I was hooked from the beginning. I did not expect that ending! The flow is great. Going ...

Wow. Great job! I really enjoyed this! It makes the reader really think. It's very powerful. I love the starting line. It entices you to read more. "those who can ...

Great job! This really gets the emotions going! The pain and fear are very well portrayed in this poem. I can really relate to this poem as my dad has ...

Wow! Just wow! I absolutely adore this piece! The imager is magnificent and very captivating! "Bees buzzed, joining butterflies in an intricate dance the girl could barely take her eyes ...

I really enjoyed reading this! The flow works really well with the subject and emotion level. It really showcases the emotions and feeling this person is having. You can really ...