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Thanks! I'll take care of those typos soon.

Thank you :3

Thanks!

Thank you for the review! I'm flattered.

I am still working on it XD I'm back in school, so I don't have as much time, and I'm doing another LMS novel, so a lot of my current ...

Whoops! I had it in the wrong folder. The other chapters should be on the right now

Heyo~ Thanks for the great review. Ahaha. Long sentences. The worst feature of my writing. One note, the dialogue where you referenced "the only Golden" she actually says "I am ...

Not abrasive at all! Thank you~

Oh XD Whoops. You're welcome~

Thanks for the review! When you say I added a lot of adjectives in some area's could you point out an example or two? Thanks again~

Thanks for the review (you did great :D reviewing a mod's work is like reviewing anyone else's)!

Writing better is all about practice! I hope my review helped you learn how to fix your grammar mistakes.

I took care of it for you Pretzel ;)

Thank you. I'm really proud of my characters xP They're what created this in the first place. While I'm not afraid of character development, I'm terrified of action scenes which ...

Thanks for the review. Don't feel like you have to apologize so much. Your points have merit, and I will be taking them into account when I edit. I'm tough. ...