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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: That Four Letter Word

    I really enjoyed this short story. I love the use of imagery. I love when Tom brushes Lilac's head. It seems like something a guy would do. I felt as ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: What If...

    I really enjoyed this piece. This poem really made me think "what if". It is really interesting to have a taste of what your opinion would be like if life ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Fire & Blood Chapter 1

    Thank you for the constructive criticism! I do have more chapters that I have already written, so I would like to hear from you when I do eventually publish them. ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Forever Waiting

    I really enjoyed this poem. Sometimes it's good to write something serious every once in a while.

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: An Athlete Knows

    This perfectly conveys how I feel, and probably how all athletes feel, about failure, pain, work, and passion. Keep up the good work! :)

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Connect the Dots

    I really enjoyed reading this. I am always fond of learning about new disorders. This was really creative. Keep doing what you are doing.

    May 23, 2015


You are not the voice in your mind, but the one who is aware of it.
— Eckhart Tolle