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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: That Four Letter Word

    I really enjoyed this short story. I love the use of imagery. I love when Tom brushes Lilac's head. It seems like something a guy would do. I felt as ...

    May 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: What If...

    I really enjoyed this piece. This poem really made me think "what if". It is really interesting to have a taste of what your opinion would be like if life ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Fire & Blood Chapter 1

    Thank you for the constructive criticism! I do have more chapters that I have already written, so I would like to hear from you when I do eventually publish them. ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Forever Waiting

    I really enjoyed this poem. Sometimes it's good to write something serious every once in a while.

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: An Athlete Knows

    This perfectly conveys how I feel, and probably how all athletes feel, about failure, pain, work, and passion. Keep up the good work! :)

    May 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Connect the Dots

    I really enjoyed reading this. I am always fond of learning about new disorders. This was really creative. Keep doing what you are doing.

    May 22, 2015


The brain is wider than the sky.
— Emily Dickenson