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Re: Labels
This is awesome! I love how the narrator is blowing off the bullies/society and not letting them bring em down. This is really powerful. I absolutely loved every part of ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: Blood
Wow! This poem is absolutely amazing! I can feel the emotion pouring out of it. I myself have not been in the position the narrator is in, but the detail ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: Surrender
Hello! Megan17 with a review! I really liked this poem. I could definitely feel the emotion you put into it which makes it that much more fun to read. I ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: A Train Ride
Hello, Megan17 here with a review. Overall, I loved this poem. The description you used was wonderful. All of the detail made me feel like I was right there with ...
Mar 3, 2018 -
Re: I'm skinny now
Hello! Megan17 here with a review. I was really moved by this poem. Being a teenage girl, I know whats it like to hate yourself and have serious self confidence ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: cough
Hello! Megan17 here to review. I loved this poem so much! The detail in it was amazing. I really liked when you wrote, "you pass me like one passes through ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: As I go once more to rest
Hello CoffeeCat, Megan17 with a review :). I love this piece! It was so captivating, and the imagery was amazing. I really liked the way you set up your poem ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: I'm tired
This was a very powerful piece. Being a teenager myself, I totally relate to feeling like nobody appreciates you or the things you do. I feel like your message was ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: dElEtEd
Wow. This is so great! The details you used to describe setting, mood, tone, just everything, were exquisite! I could feel myself in that day. I really liked how you ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: Who Am I
This is awesome! I love how you transition from how we try to make other see us, to just being yourself. This is so powerful, and the message is so ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 9.1)
I really like what you've done with this chapter! The detail is amazing! I truly feel like I am a part of the story. I also like how have incorporated ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: "You Are Sick"
I really loved this poem! I thought your uses of symbolism were exquisite! I myself have an illness that requires lots of annoying maintenance so I completely understand where you ...
Jan 27, 2018
