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Oh ok thank you :)

Awwww glad it made you smile!! :)

Thanks :) I wasn't really paying attention to rhythm kind of lol I was just writing what I was feeling plus it was night time. Just posted it cause my ...

I just wanna say I got a 98% on this! She took two points off cause i made a little grammatical error... "slowly seeps in", should be seep in...but I'm ...

Thank you for the review! It was helpful! I will take out those lines like "Why do I need people?!" and fix what you said :3 Thank you very much ...

Yay Hope didn't give fluff XD Oh the choppy paragraphs were done on purpose. She didn't specify we needed actualy paragraphs. I guess I was trying to make it...dramatic? I ...

Thank you Hope!! Lol

This is good! I find it quite humerous. I can imagine an egg with legs only running around my house! But to tell you the truth I really don't get ...

You made sure you described everything, and it worked. I was able to imagine the train and stuff. It was good. Nice job =D

I liked it. To me it expressed your feelings. And it had a nice rhythm to it. Very nice.

hey thanks lol ill try to change it soon

it's coming along well i guess.-_- i haven't had a chance to put the next chapter up.-oh I'm so lazy- I have honor band today (literally almost all day) wish ...

Thanks! @Genesis a.k.a. maxlovesfang15: Yes, I have read the first and last books of Maximum Ride. I'm not very fond of the series, but it gave me the idea for ...

[quote="vstarfirix"]Oi, it's you sister here. Your story is great and everything, but there is one thing wrong with it. It's too much like James Patterson' s series, Maximum Ride. Don't ...

MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D