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  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Romantic Re: Insanity, Yugiyoh, and Breaking Up... Adventures in Discovering Myself.

    Hi Hannah, Thank you so much for your fantastically constructive and encouraging review! A writer's first goal (as you well know :) is to connect with their readers, and it ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Romantic Re: Love is Bipolar.

    Hi Kara, Thank you so much for the review! So glad you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate that you could relate to what I am going through. It's been a ...

    Apr 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Romantic Re: Love is Bipolar.

    Hi Blue, I was hoping you would review this piece! Your feedback is always wonderfully constructive. I paused to consider the potential insensitivity of this essay as I was writing ...

    Apr 28, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Romantic Re: Insanity, Yugiyoh, and Breaking Up... Adventures in Discovering Myself.

    Hi BlueAfrica, Thank you so much for your review! You gave me some great things to work on with this piece. To answer your question, this was more of an ...

    Apr 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Long-Dreaded Severance

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    Hello @StormCloud, Wow. This piece spoke to me so intimately, I could not help but return for several re-reads. It was almost melodic, and ensnaring. Your words, ironically, could be ...

    Apr 9, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: Lingerie, Bing Crosby, and Belly Bulge... Thoughts on Christmas Eve.

    Thank you for the kind review, AkankshaD! Ain't nothin' wrong with being single! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece, and appreciate your thoughts! :) -mav

    Jan 25, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: Lingerie, Bing Crosby, and Belly Bulge... Thoughts on Christmas Eve.

    Hello @Gymnast2801, Thanks for your kind review of my piece! I appreciate your thoughts, and was happy to read that you could relate! To answer your question, I always link ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: Lingerie, Bing Crosby, and Belly Bulge... Thoughts on Christmas Eve.

    Hello @Dracula, Thank you for reviewing this piece! I appreciate your thoughts and constructive advice. Glad you took something away from reading it, too. We are so guided by what ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Film, Dramatic Re: Marlon Brando

    Hello @JosephGeorge, Thanks for your thoughts on this piece! I appreciate your opinion. :) -mav Mavis Knightley

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Film, Dramatic Re: Marlon Brando

    Hello @Kaos, Thanks for your constructive and insightful review of this piece. I appreciate your thoughts! -mav

    Dec 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Film, Dramatic Re: Marlon Brando

    Hello @PenPacifist, Thanks you for the kind and encouraging review of this piece. I always love to find other young people who appreciate the classics! Thanks for your thoughts. :) ...

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.

    Hello @Nike, Thanks for the kind review of this piece. I appreciate your insight. Truthfully, the real version of this letter was never sent but you make a strong argument ...

    Dec 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.

    Hello @AllisonArgent, Thanks for the review! It was funny and thoughtful, and I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. In the future I will be sure to take you seriously/not take ...

    Oct 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Mournings After

    This review was helpful and encouraging, @Jyva. Thank you for your thoughts, and your time! -mav

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Mornings After (Death of a Son)

    Please see the edited version of this piece: Thanks! -mav

    Oct 9, 2016


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