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This is so original. I absolutely love this. I definetley want to read more about this. The one thing I am kind of confused about is this like a prostitution ...

So beautiful! That describes my friendship with my best friend. Maybe add some different description of how you think your friend sees the friendship. But I love the way you ...

That is absolutely adorable. I love it! You did a great job at describing the way he feels about her when he saw her. "Stomach did a flip-flop", that is ...

I really like the love triangles and rectangles going on. You really got me into it. Some grammar could be fixed like near the beginning you wrote "What's their names?" ...

This is literally breathtaking. I can feel the anxiety coming from the words. Wanting to be heard but too afraid to say anything. Reminds me of the song Breakaway by ...

What an emotional ride. This is absolutely brilliant. I haven't read everything you have wrote yet but I am going to start. The part when the mom starts yelling at ...

Simply amazing! This is the kind of stuff teens and young adults LOVE! It's all supernatural and murder and fantastic. I love the emotion in your writing, when I read ...

Oh my god! This is absolutely amazing! The way you described that relationship was just phenomenal. You are truly a gifted writer. I want to hear more from you on ...

I really like the science fiction of it. But I am very confused in the beginning. You need to explain who is talking, what point of view the story is ...

I really like the story line and the characters. You definitely put a twist on this genre and scene that I haven't seen before. I would work on really defining ...