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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Black and white

    Descriptive word choice, as well as the stanza arrangement being on point. I do like this very much. I do have to add that it would need some work on ...

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Embers and Smoke

    Hello, Collideascope! When reading just the first couple of sentences, I can tell what kind of poem this would be; detailed and filled with dramatic imagery. How the words are ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Haunted

    Hello. I must start this off by saying that I was given chills upon my first read. Your style of writing brings out the little details, which is an all-time ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Strangers

    7/10 Hello, Amindor! I would like to start out this review by pointing how good your organizing is, when it came t pacing! The structural section is magnificent and I ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Second Chances

    7/10 Hello, JensenAcklesFan! I must say, this was written in such a unique format. One epic stanza it seems it was, sharing your pain on each line. With the minor ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I'm sorry

    Hello, arianaSarroyo. My name is Matt and I will be reviewing your poetry/lyric addition to the page. First off, the darkness definitely is present in this piece. In some cases, ...

    Jul 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Griphen

    Hi, justagirl! I must say, I was absolutely shocked by the ending of this poem. Bravo on that! The experiences in this seeped into the readers mind and at the ...

    Jul 3, 2013


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