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Re: Black and white
Descriptive word choice, as well as the stanza arrangement being on point. I do like this very much. I do have to add that it would need some work on ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Embers and Smoke
Hello, Collideascope! When reading just the first couple of sentences, I can tell what kind of poem this would be; detailed and filled with dramatic imagery. How the words are ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Haunted
Hello. I must start this off by saying that I was given chills upon my first read. Your style of writing brings out the little details, which is an all-time ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
7/10 Hello, Amindor! I would like to start out this review by pointing how good your organizing is, when it came t pacing! The structural section is magnificent and I ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Second Chances
7/10 Hello, JensenAcklesFan! I must say, this was written in such a unique format. One epic stanza it seems it was, sharing your pain on each line. With the minor ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: I'm sorry
Hello, arianaSarroyo. My name is Matt and I will be reviewing your poetry/lyric addition to the page. First off, the darkness definitely is present in this piece. In some cases, ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Griphen
Hi, justagirl! I must say, I was absolutely shocked by the ending of this poem. Bravo on that! The experiences in this seeped into the readers mind and at the ...
Jul 3, 2013
