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I just finished it. I loved it. I am going to be starting pretties this weekend.

Well for the assingment it was supposed to be like we are writing a letter to a senator and they are thinking about passing a law requiring affirmative action

I really love this nite. I thought it had good meaning and thought put into it but it does not have very good rhythm

I loved how short the poem is. The lines I loved the most is 2,3,5,6, and 8. You used description to your advantage. I really could not find anything wrong.

You used great imagery. I also loved the first and last stanza. In the first stanza I loved how you used the devil. Like funkyflower said you could work on ...

I loved the way it flowed. I really do not think it needs punctation because I like the way it flows without punctation. But I am not the person to ...

I absolutely loved your poem. It used reality to help express all of the feelings. I also loved how you used the line from sugar were goin' down(I really like ...

I think it is very cool and random. I like random things. It is very good my stuff that I wrote in 3rd grade is very bad.

I liked it. I live in Subaria and I hate it her. Nobody seems to care about the world picture and just do not seem to care about bettering their ...

I have read the egypt game, secret garden, and a little princiess. But it has been a really long time since I have read them and i really do not ...

I love the lyrics. It is cool. You know Nite you are a really good writer.

I really liked it and it showed a lot of feeling. It is an amazing poem.

I thought it was funny and very unique

I liked the book.We had to read it in 7th grade. I cried at the end. We also watched the movie but I personally liked the book better

Yeah I cannot wait to hear it. I love wacky stuff. Its a lot of fun. Yeah but I am weird like that.