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Hi there! Manisha here to review. I'm reviewing after a really long time! I'll review as I read. The moonlit sky was a void of pitch black, except for the ...

Manisha to review chapter 12 for you! Go Team Rocket

Manisha here to review. I reviewed you chapter 13 and 14 and here I am reviewing 11. You have to forgive my not at all orderlyness. I'll review as I ...

Hi again. Manisha here for chapter 14. I'll review as I read :) He was anger at Wyatt, he could see it on his face. Blaming Wyatt for the mess ...

Hi Tia! Happy Review Day. Manisha from Team Rocket here to review your chapter. I haven't read the previous chapters hence my review will be based on this chapter alone. ...

Hey there! Happy review day. I'll review as I read :) I realized it was a grenade to late, and she hurled it at the house. I suggest you frame ...

Hi again. Lets jump right in, shall we. I'll review as I read. I feel a certain kinship for bouncy balls now. Getting bounced off hard surfaces while you’re pretty ...

Happy Review day! I'm going to lay off the typos and grammatical mistakes and concentrate on the story itself. This chapter seems to be poorly thought out. Chapter one did ...

Heyo Ana. I saw you chapter 5 in the green room so I decided to read the previous chapters too. I'll review as I read. One could almost say it ...

Hi there! I see you are fairly new to YWS. Welcome to the site. I'll review as I read. Why, hello there. I'm Jasmine Felton, age 14. Jasmine may be ...

Hi again :) This.Was.Really.Good. Really really good. I just told my mum the story who is sitting in the same room. I am so glad you linked me this. The ...

Hi there Gaurav! Forgive me if my review is short and not that detailed! I'll review as I read. A fierce gale blew at night. A jamun tree standing in ...

Hi there! Manisha here to review this chapter for you. I'll review as I read. As you said you are working on your grammar I'll lay off from pointing out ...

Manisha here for a review! I'll review as I read. It is past midnight in the city. Yet the everlasting silence does not end. I found these two sentences contradicting. ...

Hi there! You already have solid reviews which covers about everything. So this is going to be a short review. If Mumbai had it's own dictionary, Marine Drive could have ...