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Ah, good. Thank you, whence. =D

Ah, thank you all very much! You don't know how happy it makes me to know you all enjoyed my poem. =] McMourning, I have a reason for having "letting ...

This is cute. I felt like there was some missing punctuation in places, though. Pretty basic message. It's almost like the title gives it away, though. Like the poem just ...

The imagery is of a spider actually inside of a person ... the chest being a human chest, not like a treasure chest. The poem is about how love ends ...

It can't exactly stand alone, but it's good in structure, rhythm, and flow. =]

Ah, thank you both very much! I really appreciate the feedback, and I'll definitely try to fix that third stanza. =]

Aw, would more people please comment this one? I have a feeling it's a little too corny ... I need help.

Woah, I've never read anything like that before. Very good use of imagery! I did think that "I begin to taste your mean in my blood" didn't make much sense, ...

Ah, thank you! And yes, I completely agree. I'll make that correction. =]