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Re: Make Love Don't Fight
Hello, Becky! These lyrics are pretty good, they have a really great message. I love the line, "like JLopez said, Make Love Don't Fight!". It kinda takes away from the ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Seed of tears
Hello, SunnyD This is a lovely poem. It has a very nice theme and is very witty and cute. I do see a few mistake, though so here we go. ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: Please Don't Look At Me
Hello! This poem is very, very good. I absolutely love the lines "Until life Ceases To hurt" Its a phenomenal way to end the poem and really adds to the ...
Nov 17, 2015 - Re: The One who Can't Love Me Nov 14, 2015
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Re: My Demons Won't Leave
This is honestly a very interesting piece of writing. I love how deep the message is and the description is also good. I love the line, "The darkness is getting ...
Nov 11, 2015