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lvrpiper102

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    This work is truly genuine, I find myself unable to put it down. I've observed that many individuals share this sentiment towards their mothers. However, to openly express it is ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Self Love vs Self Hate

    Hello! I don't typically write critiques, but I felt compelled to share my thoughts on this piece. The exploration of the pain and anguish that comes with being compared to ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: A letter for someone who used to be different.

    Your work is truly beautiful, with each word carrying deep meaning. Maintaining a long-term friendship can be challenging, but your ability to see the good in everything and carry joy ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Diary (a poem)

    As someone who struggles with religion, I like seeing people willing to assist others in discovering their own goals in life. "Is there anything to pray for? I've stopped praying." ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love in despair.

    I appreciate a variety of poetry, especially ones like this. I adore the repetition in vain; portraying love can be done in a variety of ways, and I enjoy seeing ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Man, wouldn’t it be so easy

    I hold a special place in my heart for short, beautiful poems. The way this poetry is detailed makes my heart grin. I adore how you described playing the guitar; ...

    Jul 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: everythingwasbeautiful&nothinghurt

    This poem captures my imagination and resonates deeply with my soul, prompting me to ponder the beauty of human connection and the significance of time. I am enamored with how ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Scatterbrained

    This poem has struck a chord of resonance with me like no other. I can fully relate to its message and the emotions it presents. As a young person coming ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Romantic Re: First Snowfall

    This was an adorable story, I enjoyed reading it by far! A special Christmas night won my heart. You’re making me want to go into the Christmas mood. Their intimate ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Other » Science Fiction, Politics Re: A Better World

    I really enjoyed reading your writing style. I enjoyed seeing the different ways you expressed this. I’ve said this in other reviews is that I love first person perspective. I ...

    Oct 20, 2023


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19