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Re: An Ode to Childhood
Thanks for the reviews and the formatting help! :D
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: An Ode to Childhood
So I can't figure out how to format this poem so it will show the spaces between my stanzas. Can anyone help me out? I never had a problem with ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: My Angel
Wow this is really good. You made it short and to the point, but full of impact. You did a great job of the age old saying "show, don't tell." ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Have You Ever...? (revised)
Wow I love this! I can totally relate, and you captured so much raw emotion that I felt like I was there again. I love your use of questions that ...
Sep 9, 2009 -
Re: To Be Like Jesus
Thanks everyone for your comments! And yes, the spacing is messed up. When I first posted it the spaces were still there, so I'm not sure why they disppeared now. ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: God is Love
Thanks for your review! :D I was trying to make each stanza 3 lines, but I agree it is confusing. I'm going to change it to make it easier to ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Compassion out of Pain
Thanks for the reviews everyone :D I appreciate your input
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Like a Child
Well I haven't been online in a few days, so I was pleasantly surprised when I saw 6 critiques to my poem. That just made my day. :D So thanks ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Song of My Heart
Thanks for the comments! I will keep them in mind when editing.
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: My 1st short story!! :D The Road Less Traveled Part I
Hey I like your story. :) It must be difficult to learn a second language well enough to write a story. You did a really good job.
Oct 5, 2008