lunae

Hello!! There is something about this that sounds so much like song, and that fits so much with the title and content i love it!!! Your fourth line is such ...

Hello!! There is something about this that sounds so much like song, and that fits so much with the title and content i love it!!! Your fourth line is such ...

I really like the reality that you put in this, i can relate and almost feel the anger that your characters are putting out. You write in such a way ...

Yes! i agree completely, everyone always tells me to make my poem uppercase, but i really like how it looks when it isn't.

Yes! i agree completely, everyone always tells me to make my poem uppercase, but i really like how it looks when it isn't.

Yes! i agree completely, everyone always tells me to make my poem uppercase, but i really like how it looks when it isn't.

wow this is incredible, i never remember my dreams so i can relate to this completely!

Wow, this is a really really incredible piece of work. I read it through 3 or 4 times and i enjoyed it more and more each time, the images were ...

Wow this poem is amazing! i love the emotion of fearlessness that runs through it. One thing though, some of your sentences are phrased a little awkwardly. Besides that though, ...

Thanks!!!!

thanks so much!! that means a lot to me! i see what your saying about the commas and ill edit it.