lukekazey

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Thank you again. I honestly love your analyses. As I mentioned below, this poem was very much a kind of %u201Cwrite words and see what comes out%u201D kinda poem, hence ...

Thank you so much! I%u2019ll definitely take a look at your suggestions.

Thank you so much! I%u2019ll definitely take a look at your suggestions.

Oh, okay then. Thanks!

Thank you! So my basic intention when writing is that the kid has received a birthday card from his dad, but his dad is dead/ not around, so it really ...

Thank you so much. Honestly, I have very little idea of my intention in this poem. It was one of those poems I wrote when I kind of had writers ...

Ah, never be embarrassed Europa. We%u2019re all here to improve. And if the rest of your poetry is anything like this, there%u2019s really no reason to be ashamed.

Thank you!

Hey, just a small note. I’d love to review this, but I don’t speak Hindi, and Google Translate can only translate a few lines. What would be great is if ...

Thank you!

Love, love, love, love this poem. It’s honestly amazing- probably one of the best I’ve ever read.

Thank you!

Thank you! My aim was to create a confused idea of the sister, but maybe there are better ways to do so. I%u2019m gonna have a look and see what ...

Thanks for the welcome and review! I%u2019ve been here before under a different username, but it%u2019s good to be back. My intention within the piece was to create mystery and ...