lukas8u

Um.. I cannot stand another Edward fan poem. And as a poem, it wasn't that good either. Scrap it or make a total over haul.

Hmm.. I don't know how it can be found offensive. I am atheist, and I thought this up with a Jewish friend of mine. It's merely mocking the circumstance and ...

If I had yet to see an example of worthless words for points, then I just found it. Great Play anyways. It's gone on under so much editing already, (that's ...

Awesome. Maybe a bit more meat between the trailer parts. When you going to write the movie?

Frankly, I can't find this believable. Maybe the idea was to suspend reality for the purpose of the story, but still. It was decent. The ending was very ironic though.

I like the a-b-c rhyme scheme, itreally fits in to the "jumble" of instruments theme. The Edgar Allen Poe reference at the end was good.

Double post- sorry

What was that? At least try some proper grammar. This isn't a new version of face book, it's actually about writing, and that was not it.