luciditysNovelist

Thank you so much! This wasn't cruel at all; I'm glad and grateful that you took the time to read this and give such constructive criticism!

Thank you very much! I'll work on amending the errors you pointed out!

Thank you! I was aiming to play around with how they would perceive each other, so I'm glad that I was able to get that across to you!

Thank you! I can definitely assure you that the topics about which you have questions were deliberately open-ended, and will be explored more as I expand on these characters. Thank ...

Ohhhh... I thought it was referring to "patch" as in "a patch of snow". Thank you for that point of clarification.

Thank you very much for your kind comments! I'm glad I was able to convey that sort of feeling with the angel - I've always felt that the traditional "blonde, ...

Thank you! This is intended as a sort of medias res introduction to the characters, and I'm most definitely planning to write more! Again, thank you.

The Guardian is intended to be enigmatic at this point in the story, but the general conceit behind them is that they belong to a species with some of the ...

You're very welcome, and I'm glad I was able to be of assistance!

You're very welcome, and I'm glad I was able to be of assistance!

You're very welcome! I hope I was able to help.

You're very welcome, and I'm glad that I was able to help you! ^_^

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You're very welcome! I'm glad I was able to help.