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Re: When the Time comes (revised)
im sorry to hear that jenny and dan finally moved. i hope your not grieving too much. congratulations on a great, expressive poem. it's intelligent.
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: What to write about?
clever..
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Black Hole
i loved the first stanza.. its a great poem but i think you should make it longer. i felt like i was left hanging there.
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Gangsta Cat Rap
i don't know you..but i would call you my best friend.
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: My Inspiration
i can relate to finding an "inspiration" which seemed to make reading this poem more inspiring, may i say, and put me on the same level as you. loved it!
Mar 10, 2011 - Re: The meaning of being Pretty Mar 10, 2011
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Re: Wishes
such a beautiful poem. BRAVO!
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: speechless
thank you for the constructive critisizm, much appreciated. jojo, i really like what you did with my poem.
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm Sorry
you can feel the emotion of the young lover expressing himself. it is such a beautiful story of regert, i really admire it. great job!
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Bad deed
I LOVE YOU! this is really cute tara..just space out your stanzas :)
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: a forgotten song
this is beautiful. *following valentine
Mar 1, 2011