Published March 20, 2011
The time has finally come,
I exhale that buried sigh.
It's the day i've been hiding from,
and I tremble my last good-bye
We've always spread many cheers.
Our memories are forever engraved.
You've brought upon many tears.
They will always be eternally saved.
It's March 19, 2011.
You're undesirably gone
I'll be thinking of you 24/7,
Every single dusk and dawn.
Jersey is now a thief,
Stealing a brother.
causing a lot of grief.
that's like none other.
And don't forget my only older sister.
Now tears stream down my face,
resulting in an emotional twister.
I know I must embrace.
The pain of your absence is too much to bare.
You're actions have truly affected many.
I hope to hear soon that you reached it there,
i'll be reunited with you soon, Jenny.
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thanks kace... and I picked up on the subliminal message...
im sorry to hear that jenny and dan finally moved. i hope your not grieving too much. congratulations on a great, expressive poem. it's intelligent.
Im liking this poem!