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Re: the sparkly vampire and chosen wizard tales
Hey, I must say, that was soooo funny! I am ashamed to say that I loved how you pertrayed Bella to be an idiot. I personally don't care about punctuation ...
Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:16 pm -
Re: Through These Eyes
I really liked your poem. I understand how as children, we only saw good in the world and dismissed the bad. But now that we can understand pain and anguish ...
Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:03 pm -
Re: Good Enough to Eat
OMG that was amazing! ! That was so awesome, but not if that man was really going to eat the girl. In that case I would be slightly frightened but ...
Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:54 pm -
Re: Strewberries with Cream
It was absolutly perfect! It stuck a nurve in me and for that reason I am not ashamed to say that I cried. I cried like an emotionally disturbed child. ...
Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:28 am -
Re: Blue Eyed Boy
I really loved this. I think that at one point, we have all felt that way about someone else. The way you put it is just the way it really ...
Mon Dec 20, 2010 11:19 pm -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
I absolutly ADORE your poem. it was wonderful! Do not listen to anyones corrections, I think that it was absolutly perfect. I found it bittersweat, to me it sounds like ...
Fri Dec 17, 2010 2:31 am -
Re: These Words Don't Fit
Your writing is simply beautiful. It was not to long at all! Do not listen to any negative comments! Of course we get points by our comments, and negative comments ...
Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:01 pm -
Re: I Love You More
the poem here, u could hav added a little more. who is it ur talkin about? why do u love him/her so much? how much did he pay you to ...
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:59 am -
Re: eager eyes
I love that poem! Your writing is amazing. I don't know why people MUST comment on punctuation! But that was really beautiful. I was wondering if that actually happened to ...
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:54 am -
Re: Purple Lipstick on my Collar (UPDATED 5/15)
Wow, that was long, obviously not too long if I read all of it in 2 hours XD You must be so proud of me! I really enjoyed it, but ...
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:45 am -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
Hi! I LOVE the prologue! You must continue it! It doesn't matter what everyone else thinks, I thought it was perfect! You are the author, you decide what happens. I ...
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:37 am
